Things have begun to pick up here. I’ve picked up additional duties as Battalion Safety Officer, yearbook representative and other catch-alls. So it’s been pretty busy. Otherwise, I’m getting pretty good at semi-regularly updating my blogs.
I’m also getting extra practice in English classes as I edit awards my NCOs type up. That seems to be a big thing that officers do; write up Article 15s and correct grammar. Unfortunately, I was too lenient with my NCOs. I would let certain phrases or poorly constructed sentences through and the commander had to get on me about that. You know, I was thinking, “These soldiers have over 30 combined years and have written awards before… surely they must know something about them.” Apparently not. I shouldn’t have deferred to their experience over my common sense. I wish I was five years older with ten more years Army experience under my belt.
To help correct the grammar and spelling issues, I am planning a little class on Army writing to make sure we don’t repeat our performance. It would be a lot easier to do this back in the rear… more time to plan it and a place to hold it. It’s going to have to be informal here. Army writing is pretty simple though. We actually try to break sentences down to the most basic components. Subject, linking verb, predicate. No fluff or superfluous writing. Clear and concise active voice. I prefer the Army’s method.
I’m also giving classes to the Soldiers getting them ready for redeployment. Whether I like it or not, I influence them as a role model. Hopefully I’ve gained their respect enough in this short time that I can make an impact on them. Sometimes the most dangerous times a Soldier has is the first weekend he’s home and cut loose from all the restrictions. I’ll let them know what I’m doing, that I’m being responsible. Part of my role as an officer to provide the example of the “right,” or more mature I suppose, behavior (along with the senior Non-coms). I’m pretty much a straight arrow, so that shouldn’t be a problem.
2LT Adam Ochylski